ゴルフと感謝の挨拶

添削してIt was my much pleasure to meet you.It was very unfortunate that the thunders welcomed me but I enjoyed the golf very much.I also thank you for your support CK san who has been managing the Vietnamese company alone.I am looking forward to seeing you and playing golf with you again hoping to finish the 18 holes.Best regards,

自然でビジネスらしい英語にすると、以下のようになります。 > It was a great pleasure meeting you. > Although it was unfortunate that we were welcomed by thunderstorms, I thoroughly enjoyed the golf. > I would also like to thank you, and CK-san in particular, for your tremendous support in managing the Vietnamese company on your own. > I look forward to seeing you again and playing another round of golf together, hopefully completing all 18 holes next time. > > Best regards, より温かみを出すなら、 > It was a great pleasure meeting you. > Although the thunderstorms were not exactly the welcome I had hoped for, I thoroughly enjoyed our round of golf. > I would also like to express my sincere appreciation to you and CK-san for your continued support, especially for managing the Vietnamese company single-handedly. > I truly look forward to seeing you again and having another opportunity to play golf together, hopefully making it through all 18 holes next time. > > Best regards, の方が自然で上品な印象になります。特に **"It was my much pleasure" → "It was a great pleasure"**、**"the thunders" → "thunderstorms"**、**"finish the 18 holes" → "complete all 18 holes"** がネイティブらしい表現です。

t was a great pleasure meeting you. Although the thunderstorms were not exactly the welcome I had hoped for, I thoroughly enjoyed our even half round of golf. I would also like to express my sincere appreciation to you to support CK-san who has been managing the Vietnamese company single-handedly. I truly look forward to seeing you again and having another opportunity to play golf together, hopefully making it through all 18 holes next time.Best regards,

とても自然になっています。少しだけ文法と表現を整えると、さらに洗練されたビジネス英語になります。 > It was a great pleasure meeting you. > Although the thunderstorms were not exactly the welcome I had hoped for, I thoroughly enjoyed even our half round of golf. > I would also like to express my sincere appreciation to you for supporting CK-san, who has been managing the Vietnamese company single-handedly. > I truly look forward to seeing you again and having another opportunity to play golf together, hopefully making it through all 18 holes next time. > > Best regards, あるいは、少し温かみを加えるなら、 > It was a great pleasure meeting you. > Although the thunderstorms prevented us from completing the round, I thoroughly enjoyed the time we spent on the golf course. > I would also like to express my sincere appreciation to you for your continued support of CK-san, who has been managing the Vietnamese company single-handedly. > I truly look forward to seeing you again and having another opportunity to play golf together, hopefully completing all 18 holes next time. > > Best regards, こちらの方が「途中で中断したが楽しかった」というニュアンスが自然に伝わります。特に **"half round of golf"** よりも **"the thunderstorms prevented us from completing the round"** の方が英語圏では自然です。