EY依頼文の英語添削

添削してThank you for forwarding the requests from EY. Do you know how many of them you are supposed to send to EY? I wonder if I should take a look at them first.

もちろんです。意味は十分伝わっていますが、少し自然なビジネス英語にすると以下がよいと思います。 ### ① 自然でシンプル > Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests. > Do you know how many of these you are expected to send to EY? I’m wondering if I should review them first. ### ② 少し丁寧 > Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests. > Do you know how many of these you are expected to submit to EY? I’m wondering whether I should review them first before they are submitted. ### ③ 「EYに出す前に一度見た方がよいか」というニュアンスを明確に > Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests. > Do you know how many of these you are expected to submit to EY? I’m wondering if it would be better for me to review them before they are submitted. 私なら**③**を使います。 監査対応の文脈では **send** より **submit**、**take a look at them** より **review them** の方が自然で、かつ「提出前に自分が確認した方がよいのでは」という意図が柔らかく伝わります。 **主な修正点:** “requests from EY” → “EY’s requests” で簡潔にし、“supposed to send” → “expected to submit” で監査対応らしい自然な表現にしています。