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日時: 2026/10/29 07:12:35
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意味は十分伝わります。より自然なビジネス英語にすると、以下がおすすめです。

### ① 自然で簡潔
> I will review them and get back to you if necessary. **For the time being, please hold off on sending these documents to EY Vietnam.**

### ② 少し丁寧
> I will review them and get back to you if I have any questions or comments. **In the meantime, please hold off on sending these documents to EY Vietnam.**

### ③ 「私の確認が終わるまで送らないで」を明確に
> I will review them and get back to you if necessary. **Until then, please hold off on sending these documents to EY Vietnam.**

今回の文脈なら、**③が一番おすすめ**です。「こちらで確認するので、それまではEY Vietnamへの送付を待ってほしい」という順序が明確です。

主な修正点は **come back to you → get back to you** の方が自然で、**hold on sending → hold off on sending** が「送付をいったん控える」という意味で正しい表現です。また、**Vietnum → Vietnam** に修正しています。

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