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日時: 2026/10/28 15:33:33
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宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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かなり自然です。①の **“after we make it simplify it”** だけ文法的に不自然なので、**“after simplifying it as we discussed”** がすっきりしています。

### ① おすすめ：自然で明確
Dear CK san,

I may not have made myself clear. Let me try to explain again as follows:

1) **March 10 Situation Report**  
In your email, you mentioned, “consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.” This indicates that there is a situation report dated March 10. That is why we need to submit it to Ks Lab **after simplifying it as we discussed**.

2) **Board Meeting Minutes**  
My question is whether there were **any board meetings this year**. If there were, I assume there should be minutes of those meetings. Could you please check whether any such minutes exist?

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,  
Koji

### ② 少しだけ柔らかく丁寧
Dear CK san,

I may not have explained myself clearly. Let me clarify what I mean:

1) **March 10 Situation Report**  
In your email, you mentioned, “consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.” This indicates that there is a situation report dated March 10. Therefore, we need to submit it to Ks Lab **after simplifying it as we discussed**.

2) **Board Meeting Minutes**  
My question is whether there were **any board meetings held this year**. If so, I assume there should be minutes of those meetings. Could you please check whether any such minutes are available?

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,  
Koji

私なら**②**にします。  
特に **“after simplifying it as we discussed”** で、「以前話したとおり、そのレポートを簡略化した上でKs Labへ提出する」という意図が自然に伝わります。

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