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日時: 2026/10/28 15:30:55
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送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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Thread ID: 19:XSACmPRfE88Ly_JQejCG3N5w6Jx4yxlUXftD1oDGuMk1@thread.v2
Message ID: 1793169055553
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カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
取込元: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com.001.pst / TeamsMessagesData / #4330

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かなり明確になっています。特に①は **simplify** だと「内容を簡略化する」という意味になるため、もし「送ってほしい」という意味なら **send/provide it** が適切です。もし本当に「簡略化してほしい」という意味なら、以下の①がその意図を自然に表します。

### ① 原文の意図を維持して自然に
Dear CK san,

I may not have made myself clear. Let me try to explain again as follows:

1) **March 10 Situation Report**
In your email, you mentioned, “consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.” This indicates that there is a situation report dated March 10. That is why we need to submit it to Ks Lab. **I would therefore appreciate it if you could simplify the report before we submit it.**

2) **Board Meeting Minutes**
My question is whether **there were any board meetings regarding this matter in the past**. If there were, I assume there should be **minutes of those meetings**. Could you please check whether any such minutes exist?

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,
Koji

### ② もう少し簡潔・ストレート
Dear CK san,

I may not have explained myself clearly. Let me clarify my questions:

1) **March 10 Situation Report**
In your email, you referred to “my situation report of 10 March 2026.” This means that such a report exists, and Ks Lab is now asking us to submit it. **Could you please simplify the report before we submit it?**

2) **Board Meeting Minutes**
My question is simply whether **there were any board meetings regarding this matter in the past**. If so, there should be minutes of those meetings. Could you please check whether any such minutes exist?

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,
Koji

**修正ポイント:** “any board meeting before” は少し不自然なので **“any board meetings regarding this matter in the past”** としました。また、複数の会議の可能性を確認しているため、**meetings / minutes of those meetings** と複数形に揃えると自然です。

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