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- 2026/10/28 15:28:35
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- Microsoft 365 Chat
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- Kabumoto Koji（株本 幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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- 1793168915657
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- koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
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本文
意図は、「3/10 reportそのものを送ってほしい」と「Board meetingが実際に開催されたか、開催されたならminutesがあるはずなので確認したい」という2点ですね。以下のようにすると、かなり明確です。
### ① おすすめ：明確で自然
Dear CK san,
I may not have made myself clear. Let me try to explain again as follows:
1) **March 10 Situation Report**
In your email, you mentioned, “consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.” This indicates that there is a situation report dated March 10. That is why we need to submit it to Ks Lab. **Could you please send me a copy of the report?**
2) **Board Meeting Minutes**
My question is whether there was **any board meeting regarding this matter**. If there was, I assume there should be **minutes of the meeting**. Could you please check whether any such minutes exist?
Thank you for your help.
Best regards,
Koji
### ② もう少し簡潔・直接的
Dear CK san,
I may not have explained my questions clearly. Let me clarify them:
1) **March 10 Situation Report**
In your email, you referred to “my situation report of 10 March 2026.” Therefore, Ks Lab is asking us to provide that report. **Could you please send me a copy?**
2) **Board Meeting Minutes**
I would like to confirm whether there was **a board meeting regarding this matter**. If so, there should be minutes of that meeting. **Could you please check whether such minutes are available?**
Best regards,
Koji
**②の方がおすすめです。**
元の文章の趣旨を変えず、「何を確認・提出してほしいのか」がCKさんに一読で伝わる形にしました。
なお、元の **“I want you to simplify it”** は「簡略化してほしい」という意味になります。文脈上は「提出してほしい／送ってほしい」だと思われるので、**“Could you please send me a copy?”** に直しています。
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