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日時: 2026/10/28 13:22:41
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送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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Thread ID: 19:XSACmPRfE88Ly_JQejCG3N5w6Jx4yxlUXftD1oDGuMk1@thread.v2
Message ID: 1793161361336
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カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
取込元: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com.001.pst / TeamsMessagesData / #4320

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もちろんです。意味は十分伝わっていますが、少し自然でビジネス向けにすると以下がよいです。

### ① 自然で丁寧
Dear CK san,

Regarding your email dated October 23 about the risk of ByteTech suing Kha, you mentioned, “Your understanding is consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.”

**I overlooked this sentence at the time, and Ks Lab is now asking me to provide your situation report dated March 10. Could you please send me a copy of the report?**

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,  
Koji

### ② 少し柔らかめ
Dear CK san,

Regarding your email dated October 23 about the risk of ByteTech suing Kha, you mentioned, “Your understanding is consistent with my situation report of 10 March 2026.”

**I’m sorry, but I overlooked this sentence in your email. Ks Lab is now asking for a copy of your situation report dated March 10. Would you mind sending it to me if you still have it?**

Thank you very much for your support.

Best regards,  
Koji

### ③ 簡潔で実務的
Dear CK san,

Regarding your October 23 email about the risk of ByteTech suing Kha, you referred to **your situation report dated March 10, 2026**.

**I overlooked this reference, and Ks Lab is now asking for the report. Could you please send me a copy?**

Best regards,  
Koji

個人的には**③が最も自然で簡潔**だと思います。「I overlooked this sentence」よりも **“I overlooked this reference”** とすると、「その記載を見落としていた」という意味がビジネスメールとして自然です。

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