EY依頼文の英語添削

日時: 2026/10/28 07:28:17
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もちろんです。意味は十分伝わっていますが、少し自然なビジネス英語にすると以下がよいと思います。

### ① 自然でシンプル
> Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests.  
> Do you know how many of these you are expected to send to EY? I’m wondering if I should review them first.

### ② 少し丁寧
> Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests.  
> Do you know how many of these you are expected to submit to EY? I’m wondering whether I should review them first before they are submitted.

### ③ 「EYに出す前に一度見た方がよいか」というニュアンスを明確に
> Thank you for forwarding EY’s requests.  
> Do you know how many of these you are expected to submit to EY? I’m wondering if it would be better for me to review them before they are submitted.

私なら**③**を使います。  
監査対応の文脈では **send** より **submit**、**take a look at them** より **review them** の方が自然で、かつ「提出前に自分が確認した方がよいのでは」という意図が柔らかく伝わります。

**主な修正点:** “requests from EY” → “EY’s requests” で簡潔にし、“supposed to send” → “expected to submit” で監査対応らしい自然な表現にしています。

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