英文メールの添削依頼

日時: 2026/10/26 17:14:19
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送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
種別: Copilot (Microsoft 365 Chat) / bizchat / RichText Media_Card
Item class: IPM.SkypeTeams.Message.Copilot.BizChat
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Thread ID: 19:_i0wkByyJBX0NIcjk0g_BNldlCihx36P47Adcv9s7u81@thread.v2
Message ID: 1793002459452
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カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
取込元: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com.001.pst / TeamsMessagesData / #4218

本文

自然で丁寧なビジネス英語にすると、以下のようになります。

> Dear CK-san,
>
> Sorry to trouble you again, but I need your support.
>
> Please refer to your September report attached. We submitted this report to Ks Lab, and they have raised questions regarding the following two matters mentioned in the report:
>
> 1. Vy  
> 2. Giftzone
>
> As you can see, the report contains only limited information on these matters, and I would prefer not to make the situation any more complicated than necessary.
>
> Therefore, could you please provide a brief and simple explanation of what happened and the current status of each matter?
>
> **1. Vy**
> - What was her position (for example, Customer Service Manager)?
> - What is the current situation? Has she decided to leave the company?
>
> **2. Giftzone**
> - What services does Giftzone provide?
> - What is the relationship between Giftzone and VGS?
> - What is the current status of the debt repayment? Ideally, it would be helpful if we could state that Giftzone is making repayments on a monthly basis.
>
> Thank you for your assistance.
>
> Best regards,  
> Koji Kabumoto

**主な修正点**
- *Sept. report* → **September report**（より自然）
- *they inquired about the follows 2 matters* → **they have raised questions regarding the following two matters**
- *there are limitted written* → **the report contains only limited information**
- *what happens and what the current status* → **what happened and the current status**
- *debt replayment status* → **debt repayment status**
- *I hope that you can say* → **it would be helpful if we could state**（監査対応としてより適切で柔らかい表現）

監査法人向けの説明依頼メールとして、かなり自然でプロフェッショナルなトーンになっています。

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