英文の契約更新表現を添削

日時: 2026/10/26 06:56:36
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宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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本文

ほぼ問題ありませんが、**"Isidore having a new Global IP feature"** がやや不自然です。英語では「新機能を備えている」は **with its new Global IP feature** や **including its new Global IP feature** の方が自然です。

おすすめは以下です。

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they now have a much better understanding of Isidore, including its new Global IP feature. Having said that, they still need a clearer understanding of where and how Isidore can be most effectively deployed within enterprises, particularly in financial institutions, from a network and infrastructure perspective. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as it will help us better understand these use cases as well.**

より自然で少し洗練させるなら、

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they now have a much better understanding of Isidore, especially with the addition of its new Global IP feature. Having said that, they still need a clearer understanding of where and how Isidore can be most effectively deployed within enterprises, particularly in financial institutions, from a network and infrastructure perspective. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as it will help us better understand these use cases as well.**

この文脈なら **"including its new Global IP feature"** が最も自然でビジネスメール向きだと思います。

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