英文の契約更新表現を添削

日時: 2026/10/26 06:54:59
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送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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Message ID: 1792965299016
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カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
取込元: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com.001.pst / TeamsMessagesData / #4184

本文

少し自然にすると、以下のようになります。

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they now have a much better understanding of Isidore and its new Global IP feature. Having said that, they still need a clearer understanding of where and how Isidore can be most effectively deployed within enterprises, particularly in financial institutions, from a network and infrastructure perspective. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as it will help us better understand these use cases as well.**

よりビジネスメールらしく、少し洗練された表現にするなら、

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they have gained a much better understanding of Isidore, particularly its new Global IP capability. However, they are still seeking a clearer view of the most effective use cases and deployment scenarios within enterprises, especially financial institutions, from a network and infrastructure perspective. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as it will help us deepen our understanding of these use cases as well.**

主な修正点:
- **Isidore with new features (global IP)** → **Isidore and its new Global IP feature/capability**
- **financial institutionsfrom** → **financial institutions, from**
- **Having said that** よりも **However** の方がビジネス文書で自然
- **understand these use cases, too** → **deepen our understanding of these use cases as well** の方が洗練された印象です。

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