英文の契約更新表現を添削

日時: 2026/10/26 06:50:25
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送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
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カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
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本文

より自然でプロフェッショナルな英語にすると、以下のようになります。

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they now have a much better understanding of Isidore than before. Having said that, they still need a clearer understanding of where and how Isidore can be most effectively deployed within enterprises, particularly in financial institutions. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as it will help us better understand these use cases from a network and infrastructure perspective.**

主な修正点：
- **became to understand** → **now have a much better understanding of**（自然な表現）
- **our Isidore** → **Isidore**（通常は所有格を付けない）
- **where and how the most effective way** → **where and how Isidore can be most effectively deployed**（文法的に自然）
- **attending the the Friday's training** → **attending Friday's training session**
- **learn those application** → **understand these use cases**
- **from network point of view** → **from a network and infrastructure perspective**

さらに少し前向きでビジネスライクにするなら、

> **In the meantime, thanks to your visits to NRI and NTT DATA during your last trip to Japan, they have gained a much deeper understanding of Isidore. However, they are still exploring the most effective use cases and deployment strategies for enterprises, particularly in the financial sector. We are very much looking forward to Friday's training session, as we hope it will provide valuable insights into practical applications from a network and infrastructure perspective.**

こちらの方が、パートナー向けのメールとしてはより洗練された印象になります。

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