英文メールの添削依頼

日時: 2026/10/16 17:31:11
最終更新
送信者: Microsoft 365 Chat
宛先: Kabumoto Koji（株本幸二） <koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com>
種別: Copilot (Microsoft 365 Chat) / bizchat / RichText Media_Card
Item class: IPM.SkypeTeams.Message.Copilot.BizChat
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Thread ID: 19:2uppuOH2y0Tyr9SakcBxLmK9MNj6idCGtkaQwjmfOo41@thread.v2
Message ID: 1792139471373
親Message ID
カストディアン: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com
取込元: koji.kabumoto@accrete-inc.com.001.pst / TeamsMessagesData / #3911

本文

より自然でビジネスメールらしくすると、以下がお勧めです。

> Dear Trinh,
>
> We have shipped the signed documents as requested. Please find the attached signed signature page for your reference.
>
> You can track the shipment using the attached tracking information.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Koji Kabumoto

もう少し丁寧にするなら、

> Dear Trinh,
>
> As requested, we have shipped the signed documents. Please find the attached signed signature page for your reference.
>
> You may track the shipment using the tracking information attached.
>
> Please let us know if you need anything further.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Koji Kabumoto

**主な修正点**
- 「Trinh san」→ 英文メールでは通常 **Dear Trinh,** が自然。
- 「please refer to the attached signed page」→ **Please find the attached signed signature page for your reference** の方が自然。
- 「You may trace the tracking number」→ 英語では **track the shipment** または **track the package** が一般的。Tracking number を "trace" とはあまり言いません。
- 「as the attached」→ **using the attached tracking information** に修正。

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